In Between Ch2P11

The story is beautiful, and i love the art. Its not usually the style of art i like in my comics, but something about it makes the whole world seem so different from ours its uncanny. You might want to go through it and correct the "next page" or add it in on most of chapter 2 and a few on chapter 1. They are missing and im a re-reader, so i like fast links.

I cant wait until the next page is out. I cant see where this story will lead (a rarity in its own right).